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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 9 part 1

szaleniec1000 May 13, 2012 13:44

In which Amanda returns from the offstage waiting room. Who? Good question.
( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 9 )

that's why commas matter, balance of stupidity, show don't tell, the pansexual '50s, a description would be nice, department of redundancy department, expospeak, i can has characterisation, anvil of foreshadowing, pov!fail, pointless wittering, hogwarts roboticised, have i mentioned i hate this fic, nudity for everyone, madam malkin's mugglewear, disembodied dialogue, harry potter, sock gap, badfic:hogwarts too exposed, said bookism, continuity isn't optional, it's full of filler

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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 6 part 5

szaleniec1000 Apr 09, 2012 21:43

This update contains some nudity.
( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 6 concluded. )

sophisticated as hell, with friends like these, too much information, department of redundancy department, not simultaneous, informed wrongness, completely nonsexual, pov!fail, welsh railway, hogwarts school of oratory, pointless wittering, priorities be damned, americanisms in the potterverse, mary sue and gary stu, have i mentioned i hate this fic, nudity for everyone, artistic integrity, madam malkin's mugglewear, harry potter, convention of the psychics, sock gap, badfic:hogwarts too exposed, out of order, continuity isn't optional, education system from hell

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